Writer and Artist
Thought is the thing you hear while you’re reading.
This, right here, is a thought. Abide it this moment.
Consider what it says to you apart from my words.
It is your own poem overlaying mine, like latticework.
What is it saying to you about me? Such a thing
I’ve been curious about for a long time now.
In what ways, I wonder, is it like my own?
R. Charboneau
Peppy, Pretty, Posh, Prose, and Poetry
Writing, Poetry
Inspired by life, death and everything inbetween
Poems with emphasis on musicality
Poetry, free verse, haiku, senryu, photography, books, art, philosophy , nature, literature.
learning to love the whirlwind that is my life
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A lover
Resisting the Misanthropic Dicta of the Degenerate Cultural Elite
Makes me think of a crinkle tubes and kaleidoscopes.
i love the fact you used latticework,
layered yet see through
almost appearing infinite.
well penned.
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Thank you so much. I think crinkle tubes and kaleidoscopes should be the name of the poem.
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I’m fully on board lol
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This fits perfectly with my post today, but also how I think as a poet. Beautiful and timely. I love the lattice part too.
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Thank you so much. You’re right, it’s very metacognitive. And I think you’re absolutely right: thinking about why you love what you do is a great way to improve your talents and skills. It also helps communicate your passion to others.
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It sounds so free, so airy. You’ve made so much space for the reader. You let us so close, we feel invited and welcome. We matter and you know we have poems to tell. Meditative.
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Thank you so much Marjetka. I think that’s the nicest thing anyone’s ever said about my work.
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I was thinking how well your poem worked with the sound of the droplets of rain hitting the pavement. So now I’m a poetess too!
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Hooray! I hope your next art critique will be in iambic pentameter.
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